采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇表达不够丰富,有些单词也拼错了。
we always think that a people could get a conclution as soon as possible should be very clevor, they are easy to get the goals. While factly not all these quickly conclution should be right or wise. a man who get a quickly conclution could only think for himselves, no time to consider for any others.
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