小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；结构较为严谨，文中衔接成分很少。

A picture is on my desk. This is a picture of Jim's family. The man is Jim's father.He is young ,and he is handsome.A woman is behind Jim. She is his mother. They are teachers. A girl is in the picture, too. She is Jim's sister. Her name is lucy. Jim and his sister are in the same class. They are Chinese.