小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My English teacher, Miss Han, is not only tall and thin but also beautiful and modern. She is our favorite teacher. Miss Han always tries her best to teach us well and regards us as hers own brothers and sisters. She is strict with us and in hers work. If we make any mistakes she will correct them for us in time. With her helping ours all do well in English. Miss Han is also our good friend. Sometimes she visits us at home to see us and our parents. We enjoy playing games with her after class. So we send her many beautiful flowers on Teacher's Day. We all feel lucky to have such a good teacher like Miss Han.