1995年专四作文真题范文:Discuss part-time job

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With the development of the society, more and more people include college students and someone who has energy to do more jobs or lacks of money.Some people agree with this behavior,while a few of people think it is not beneficial for worker ,which will disturb their minds. Everything is a double-edge sword. On the one hand, part-time job is becoming a trendency in the morden society.They can concentrate on their handy things and duties,otherwisw,they can have more time to do part-time job.On the other hand, with the tempts in the daily life, some youngers lose the clear aims on work and to seek other jobs aimless.So is is not good for people, especially young man to scheme their career in success. In my opinion, we should control our time to accomplish works in time and do the part-time job.