2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

作者词汇表达灵活丰富，希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

I lived in shanghai for many years. It’s one of the biggest cities in the world and the financial and commercial centers of China.There are a lot of scenic spots in Shanghai,but I think the most interesting place is the Bund.This attraction not only reflect the history of old Shanghai,but also show the progress and prosperity of modern Shanghai.Huangpu River flows through the Bund and divided it into two areas,the east Bund and the west Bund.There are a great many old buidings which were designed and constructed by different countries before liberation of china.On top of the Customs House,a huge old clock is still working now.The west bund,named as Mouth of LUjia, developed rapidly after reform and open-up of china.There are three famous skyscrapers,Jin mao Tower, Shanghai World Financial Centre and the Shanghai Tower. Among them,Shanghai Tower with the height of 632 meters is the tallest.It know as the third tallest building in the world.Foreign friends can go up these towers and have a good view of the bund and the entire city.There are many restaurants and bars in these buildings.They can enjoy various delicious food and drinking while looking outside for the surrounding beauty.At night,foreign friends can take cruise ship to View the night scenes on both sides of Pujiang River.The neon lights in buidings and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower lit up at the same time along the River. What a beautiful city!