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Dear Mr. Johnson We have recieved your products of 3000 picese Dec.22, but According to our signing of the No. 35 order, Product should be 3,500 pice , We are not recieved other 500 picese, Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! your sincelry Wang Haiyang