高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

my town was beautiful.Long time ago my town has a lot of trees,a clean river thought our town,it's has many fish.But people is poor ,our house is very small,stress was not wider. how about now?building are very tall,people's life become very rich,cars was runs of everywhere.But the tree become more and more less,I can't see fish anymore