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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章词汇表达丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
From:hubin@163.com Date:Dec.26th,2008 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com suject:To establish business relationship Dear sir or Madam, I knew your new product of No.5670 during the exhibition held in New York on the date of Dec,15th to 22rid and I was quite interested in it.Please send us a price list and an instruction. Thank for your attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. We are looking to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Hu Bin.
