2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦164:我的朋友

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中高级词汇不足；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。

Hi,David. My name is Lihua. I am a student from Shanghai. It is wonderful for me to be your friend. I hope that it is important for you. As a matter of fact, I love English very much. If you want to listen, I can sing many English songs for you. I have a lot of hobbies, inculding collecting stamps, running, swimming and so on. Do you know England is the country which I can't refuse. If free, I will go to there. On the other hand, a lot of my classmates want to make friends on internet. Could you help? It is very nice of you. Have a good day! Lihua.