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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear, David. My name is Lihua. I am a student from Shanghai. It is wonderful for me to be your friend. I hope that it is important for you. As a matter of fact, I love English very much. If you want to listen, I can sing many English songs for you. I have a lot of hobbies, including collecting stamps, running, swimming and so on. Do you know England is the country which I can't refuse. If free, I will go there. On the other hand, a lot of my classmates want to make friends on the internet. Could you help? It is very nice of you. Have a good day! Lihua.
