2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；可适当增加从句的使用。

As far as I am concerned, there are three most vital factors that we should achieve when we would like to reach success. My standpoints and reasons are as follows. From my angle, firstly, we ought to insist on doing what we need to otherwise must do. It's an excellent idea that we should focus on one or two work at the same time. In that case can we concentrate ourselves on what we should do and do well finally. Secondly, if it is unlucky for us to fail, we should face failures and don't dare of it. There is a saying goes ' failure is the mother of success'. The affair we should do is that we should rethink prefoundly and find out the reason why we fail. The last but not least, it is very important that we ought to keep trying to find the most suitable way. To summarize, although everyone would like to achieve success, few persons can insist. In reality, there are not just one way to success, everyone is a different individual.