从句数量偏少;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇使用熟练灵活,但要注意避免拼写错误。
It is unsensible to draw conclusion as soon as you hear something or know somebody.First of all, although the first impression is very important,but it always can’t reveal nature of things. On the contrary, what you hear or see at the first time may lead to the wrong way and make a big mistake.For example, the ordinary chicken egg may be one of the world's most perfect foods. Secondly,although some people are confident of their first sense or easy to believe other people's opions.but such unrigorous habit or dependent personality do harm to the exploration of the truth,especially in the scientic research fields.As we all know, advances in medical science comes from find unusual things from seemingly usual cases. Finally, the first impression can’t help you to know a person well.Sometimes it may be unfair to a pe on who has ugly appearance with outstanding capacity .For instance,disabled President Roosevelt Led the United States to get the victory in World War II. In general, The ideal way to get the final conclusion should be spending time for more observation and invesitigation or getting along with somebody.Thus the conclusion may be more reliable than that after the first impression.
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