文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少。
It is unsensible to draw the conclusion as soon as you hear something or know somebody.First of all, although the first impression is very important,it always can’t reveal the nature of things. On the contrary, what you hear or see at the first time may lead to the wrong way and make a big mistake.For example, the ordinary chicken egg may be one of the world's best foods. Secondly,although some people are confident of their first sense or easy to believe other people's opinions.but such unrigorous habit or dependent personality do harm to the exploration of the truth,especially in the science research fields.As we all know, advances in medical science comes from finding unusual things from seemingly usual cases. Finally, the first impression can’t help you to know a person well.Sometimes it may be unfair to a person who has ugly appearance but with outstanding capacity .For instance,disabled President Roosevelt Led the United States to get the victory in World War II. In general, the ideal way to get the final conclusion should be spending time for more observation and investigation or getting along with somebody. Thus, the conclusion may be more reliable than that after the first impression.
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