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字数：300 满分：100分
从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，同时拼写错误稍多；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As a student,we can't make a living without ous parents.We can't afford the cose of our study,daily life and ao on.So,we have to ask for parents for money.Most of us are careful with our money,even many students try their best to save money,for example,collecting coupons,buying clothes in a sale.As far an I'm concerned,those are good habits. There are some reasons accounting for it.Not only can we save money,but aslo we form good habits which are doog for ourselves in our lifes.We all benefit from those habits.
