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The table contains information about the different ethnic groups making up the population of Atlantis City over two decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；复杂句采用很棒；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Nowadays, many people discuss wether children can learn more from team actives than one-person actives. I agree with the view that team actives can teach children more life skills. I believe that children can learn more and better in a team. they can learn how to cooperate whith others in a teamwork.It is not easy for current children ,especially the children in the one-child family, to learn the skill. Futhermore,in the group, any children may have their own Strengths and weaknesses， so they can learn from other children to stength themselves.Most importantly, there is competition in a team which is also lack in children's own family because they are alowed to have whatever they want , regardless the price, and behave as they please in family, which is not allowed in a team. Those whose feel that team actives do not have more benifit may argue that children can learn independ in activities that are done alone,which is the important skill in some ways. It seems that a indepently people can do many things well personally, therefore, they can integrate into the society more quickly and easier than those who can not leave a team. However, our society is a communication society, and more people need a team than alone. In conclusion, I admite not only the team actives but also the one-person actives both can tech chirdren their life skills but the impact of team actives is more promotion.
