2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,do shopping becoming more and more fation.But it is good to us or bad to us is a good question for us. everthing have two face,online shopping is the same. do shopping on the Internet is convenient for us ,we can buy everthing on the Internet. But the goods' quality can not be guarented and same goods may have dammaged when you received it ,besides, maybe you be deceived,it will be dammaged to you propert. In my opinion,we should have a right maid on online shopping.