单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
My name is LiLin. I'm a middle school student.Today is sunday. I get up at 6:00 in the morning. I finish eating breakfast at 6:30 in the morning. Before 7:30, I finish doing my homework. I finish cleaning my room before at 9:00 in the morning. After dinner, I'm sweep the floor. At 3:00 in the afternoon, my friend and I go to the play ping-pong. Then, I watch my favorite program.