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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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There is a popular saying that don't put your eggs into one basket. Acutally this is a metaphor. We can see it from many angles in our life. From the risk management perspective, this is a reasonable method to deal with things. Speading the risk over the different things, the risk of losing everything will reduce to large extent in case your encounter unexpected situation. Take stocking market investment as an example, investors tend to set up investment portofolio made of different investment tools in a bid to distribute the risk. From life's choice, we are prone to make serveral preparation. One solution break down, then one of the rest will save you out of plight. We should try to avoid putting eggs into one basket. Once the basket break, then you will lose all your eggs. We can see some tragegies in life due to this kind of risky does. Some people hold the oppinion that they will be lucky person favored by god and then bet all the possessions to one time chance. you can imagine they will face desperation and even the loss of life when unexpected things come upon them. So this old saying is also a maxim we need to follow.

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