错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Dear David, my name is Chengquan ,yesterday I receive a letter from you and I know that you will go to Lanzhou someday,because you want to inprove your Chinese.Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese. Frist, I think you should be interested in Chinese and you really want learn it well .Second ,I think you should talk with others by Chinese often.As a saying goes,practice makes perfect.Third ,you had better be careless when you do your homewok. I hope you will have a good experence,good luck to you!