作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear David, my name is Chengquan,yesterday I receive a letter from you and I know that you will go to Lanzhou someday,because you want to improve your Chinese.Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese. First, I think you should be interested in Chinese so that you will learn it well.Second ,I think you should talk with others by Chinese often.As a saying goes,practice makes perfect.Third,you had better be careless when you do your homework. I hope you will have a good experience,good luck to you!