高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇的使用还需加强。

My homeland has changed a lot. In the past times,my town had green trees all along the road,the sky is bule,fishes swimming in the clear river,birds and many kinds of butterflies could be seen everywhere.The building are made by bricks and woods,looked ugly.The alleys I passed by everyday is small. Nowadays,my town has many tall buildings,cars can be seen everywhere,but the enviroument turned bad.Th industy develops so fast ,so that the pollution is damage our beautiful town.The fishes are died,trees are cut. It is importan to deal with the pollution.