采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇。
With the advancement of society, there is an increasing number of students ignore the study of Chinese, this has emerged and is thriving, accompained by controversies. The appearance has caused some problems on the development of our society, so we have to prevent continuing. Why does such phenomenon occur? There are all sorts of reasons. The primary reason is that a large number of foreign culture draw into China at present, more and more students are interested in learning foreign languages, at the same time, they ignore the importance of studying Chinese. Another important reason is if we want to find good job when we graduate from school, it is necessary for us to get virous of certifications, in that case, there is less and less time for us to study Chinese carefully. From my perspective, to stop this condition going on, we ought to call for the collaboration from all kinds of schools and the government. On the one hand, it is necessary for them to propagenda that Chinese is our traditional culture, it is significance of studying Chinese. On the other hand, we should appropriately decrease courses on other subjects and increase the job enquiries on Chinese.