文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;作者词汇表达较灵活,可是有些单词拼错了;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter . You want to konw what I like to do after the exam .Now let me tell you about it . Frist ,I want to watch NBA in USA and to see LeBron James.I will to say "I love you"for LeBron James .I am a basketball fan and LeBron James' fans .I think that LeBron James is the best basketball player in the world. Sconed,I am going to take part in Engilsh group to practes speaking English .I think that it is important for me to speak English ,Because we need to conmunication with diffrent people and diffrent people have diffrent ideas and diffrent ideas lead to innovation.
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