作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨。
Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam.Now let me tell you about it. First,I want to watch NBA in USA and to see LeBron James.I will saying"I love you"for LeBron James.I am a basketball fan and LeBron James' fans.I think that LeBron James is the best basketball player in the world. Second,I am going to take part in Engilsh group to practes speaking English .I think that it is important for me to speak English,Because we need to comunication with different people and different people have different ideas and different ideas lead to innovation.
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