作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨。
Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam.Now let me tell you about it. First,I want to watch NBA in USA and to see LeBron James.I will say" I love you "for LeBron James.I am a basketball fan and LeBron James' fans.I think that LeBron James is the best basketball player in the world. Second,I am going to take part in Engilsh group to practice speaking English.I think that it is important for me to speak English,because we need to communication with different people and different people have different ideas and different ideas lead to innovation.
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