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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2053
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇使用熟练灵活,但要注意避免拼写错误;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

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A common phenomenon in society today is that more and more parents send their kids to art classes such as drawing, singing, dancing and so on. What is more, some parents even sign up two or more for classes for their children. People's views on this appearance varies. Why does such phenomenon occurs? As far as I am concerned, everyone in mondern society faces highly competition nowadays, our parents think that we would get a good job and then live a happy life if we can now learn more skills. Should parents send their kids to art classes? Different people have different answers. The supporters say yes because it is very essential to have more skills for that those who has more skills and experince make more contribution to social development. However, the opponents say no as there is no necessarity to make children bear huge preasure in an early age, there is a saying goes like that' interest is the best teacher' , kids must have interest on the art classes which parents accommodate, otherwise, it is only a useless behavior that waste time and gain nothing. As is the case with many issues, sending kids to art classes has both positive and negative sides. We should make up ourselves' decisions carefully according to our own situation.

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