题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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A common phenomenon in society today is that more and more parents send their kids to art classes such as drawing, singing, dancing and so on. What is more, some parents even sign up two or more for classes for their children. People's views on this appearance varies. Why does such phenomenon occurs? As far as I am concerned, everyone in mondern society faces highly competition nowadays, our parents think that we would get a good job and then live a happy life if we can now learn more skills. Should parents send their kids to art classes? Different people have different answers. The supporters say yes because it is very essential to have more skills for that those who has more skills and experince make more contribution to social development. However, the opponents say no as there is no necessarity to make children bear huge preasure in an early age, there is a saying goes like that' interest is the best teacher' , kids must have interest on the art classes which parents accommodate, otherwise, it is only a useless behavior that waste time and gain nothing. As is the case with many issues, sending kids to art classes has both positive and negative sides. We should make up ourselves' decisions carefully according to our own situation.
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