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From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com To: John@ 163.com Date: June 10th Subject: our meeting Dear Mr.Driscoll, I'm the general manager of the Sales Department in the Fox Electronic Comply.I am honored to on behalf of our company to inform you that the date of the meeting is on June 20th.We're talking about the launch date of new products and advertising campaigns.We hope to establish a long-term cooperative relationship. Best regards, Tom Smith.