文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com To: John@ 163.com Date: June 10th Subject: our meeting Dear Mr Driscoll, I'm the general manager of the Sales Department in the Fox Electronic Comply.I am honored to on behalf of our company to inform you that the date of the meeting is on June 20th.We're talking about the launch date of new products and advertising campaigns.We hope to establish a long-term cooperative relationship. Best regards, Tom Smith.