2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦167:钢琴家

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I've got a best friend, his name is Zhang Kefan. He always gets an A in the English exam。 He's my apprentice. I'm very proud of him. He's a cute boy. I know, he likes me, but learn subjuct is NO.1. So, I can't like him. I like Wang Junkai, he's TFBOYS'S captain. He like singing songs and playing the guitar. He's very cool,but have a bit shy sometimes. I want to become his wife, in the future.