2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；文中从句的使用的有点少了；请作者增加词汇丰富度，加强拼写检查。

creating a green campus is very significant for us. fristly, it is make our campus bacome more tidy and beauty. secondly, also set a better enviroment for our study. but a green campus not only are the green enviroment but also a civilized campus, do not say dirty words and do not speak use aloud noise and so on. in order to creating a green campus, we should protect trees and grass which anyone. at the same time, we should be positive to do some civilized activities.