小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

My friend name is sherry.she is my best friend.We recongnize on college and live a same dormitory.She is twenty-one years old.Her hometown is in hebei.She have two pure eyes.She is an independant girl.No matter what happened,she always outstanding tasks completed.She go to American to trip four month by herself.She family have are four people.she and she siste,father and mother,she father is a worker and mother is a homework,her sister is a high school student.