小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

My friend name is sherry.she is my best friend .We recognition on college and live the same dormitory .She is twenty-one years old .Her hometown is in hebei .She has two pure eyes .She is an independant gir .No matter what happened ,she always fulfill the tasks .She goes to American to trip four month by herself .She family have four person .she and she sister ,father and mother ,she father is a worker and mother is a homework ,her sister is a high school student.