小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

My friend name is sherry.she is my best friend .We recognition on college and live the same dormitory .She is twenty-one years old. Her hometown is in hebei . She has two pure eyes . She is an independant gir . No matter what happened , she always fulfill the tasks .She goes to American to trip four month by herself . She family have four person .she and she sister ,father and mother ,she father is a worker and mother is a homework ,her sister is a high school student.