小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

My friend name is sherry. she is my best friend. We recognition on college and live the same dormitory. She is twenty-one years old. Her hometown is in hebei. She has two pure eyes. She is an independant girl. No matter what happened, she always fulfilling her tasks. She goes to American to trip four months by herself. She family have four persons, she and she sister, father and mother, her father is a worker and mother is a homework, her sister is a high school student.