句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;可适当增加文中高级词汇的使用,注意文中个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨。
Is a busy day for me. The sun is rising and the day beginning, at 9 am now. My mother call me to help her do some homework when I am sleeping, I am too tired because last night I am insomnia, but I listened to and have to obediently for my mother words. I am cleared my house and cook some food. Then to do my task,the teacher are assign much homework,I don`t like it. In the afternoon, I play ping-pong with my classmate, then I go to take a nap until my mom calling me to eating dinner, I wake up. At 9 pm I watch TV with my family,it is a hormony home. How enriching the day are.