拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Is a busy day for me. The sun is rising and the day beginning, at 9 am now. My mother call me to help her do some homework when I am sleeping, I am too tired because last night I am insomnia, but I listened to and have to obediently for my mother words. I am cleared my house and cook some food. Then to do my task,the teachers assign much homework,I don`t like it. In the afternoon, I play ping-pong with my classmate, then I go to take a nap until my mom calling me to eating dinner, I wake up. At 9 pm I watch TV with my family,it is harmony. How enriching the day are.