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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12877
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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文中词汇使用灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

With the rapid development of internet technology,online chatting has became more and more popular.On the bright site, it make communication easier and more convience. On the other hand, it reduce the opportunity of face to face interaction with others.As shown in the picture,Andy was addicted to the internet world so that his parent has to remind him of eating something by sending a humorous and helpless message to his computer. In my opinion,electronic communication can never replace face-to-face contact.Internet is a virtual world which is not conducive to establish stability and long-term relationship.Therefore, net friends always want to meet each other offline.Furthermore, online contact is less reliable.Although Electronic Commerce has been popular in mordern society,most of the big deal always need negotiation and signing up face-to- face.Finally,online communication may do severe damage to the growth of adolescents and their personality cultivation.Students who are active in the internet may be reclusive and unsociable.To make matters worse,Internet may become cradle of juvenile delinquency.

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