考研作文：关于领导

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Leader is the talent and of ability people who can make important decision in his/her team and be convinced by the followers. A successful leader should have a logical mind,namely he/she is clearly aware of what is happening now,analyze the situation,and put up his/her ideas to get to the aims.Besides,instead of being arrogent and jealous of other protential people,leader ought to understand his/her follows' personality,including their advantages as well as weaknesses so that theyt can asign the task in a proper way.The leader will give many chances to help others to be sucessful,too.Except those, humors is also an essential quality for leader which can heip the leader be friendly to and popular with his/her followers so that they can work in a harmony working amosphere.Last but no least,leader is supposed to have speaking skills and confidence to encourage people to fight for their team.