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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3383[网页划词已开启]
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

In the world that money and profit rank the top important things,people always tend to study how to make more money or minimun the loss of them.As we konw,in China,before we get the salary every month, some of them must be handed in the tax bereau as individral income tax.But when I work in some companies,I found it's normal that insteading of listing the real salary of every worker,another diagram that lists the minimized ones will take the place of it to be the data used for counting the individral income tax.There is no doubt that this method can maintain more money for workers,but it's also obviously dishonest. Not only for the government but also the workers.Unless the company make the salary and the part to be tax transparent to them,or they don't konw how the company calculates the money that is deducted to be tax so that they may be cheated some money.In short,dishonesty can happen in all fields, we should figure them out and protect our profits.

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