作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;正确句子的比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Now, few students of our class have a little fun in learning English. I hope that you can insist on learning English. Don't give up! Where there is a will, there is a way. How to improve our English. First, if you have time on weekends, you can go to the English movies. Second, you must study as hard as possible. Third, you speak English aloud in mornings so as to remember the key. I think that you will make great progress on learning English. I know that it is easier than done it. But you will succeed someday.