文章组织结构良好;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇使用较丰富,但高级词汇使用太少。
My grandfather is old. He is over sixty now, but he is in good health, and his hair is culry black. He is tall and handsome, and looks like a gentleman. Believe it or not, he began to learn to drive last year, and now he drives his white Nissan every day. My grandfather has taught English for about 35 years, and he has been to many countries, such as America, France and Canada. Now he is on holiday in Europe with my grandmother.