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Recently I discussed a minor of students have lost their confidence for learning English. Oppositely, study English not only can help us improve our communication with others, but it can also assist us to walk all over the world. It can be three parts-individual, another person and national. Firstly, learning English could keep your memory intact if we obtained deep English. We can through study English to maintain mind active. Consequently, prevent diseases is certain because we always keep our brain flexible instead of rusty. Secondly, we also can use English communicate with other people because English has fantastic way. Anyway, English as world language has a enormous influences for everyone in contemporary society. Contrastingly, learning English as a occupational hobby for a number of people. Thirdly, we could not be restricted in our ideology. We can use various resources of English to communicate with other people even foreigners. In international, English is so significant for everyone who wants to understand what they mean. English is important for everyone, it not only includes above them also have a lot of ways has it. I wish classmates who seeking in do not how to fix English problems can be better after you read this composition.