文章组织结构良好;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中从句使用不丰富。
I have a good friend. He name is Lin Lin .He have two big eyes and has a small mouth,he two ears are very beautiful.He is a clear boy. He very funny and kind ,often help me do homework,i very like him. At last weekend we are together go fishing around the rive,we are so happy,have a nice day.