请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair,and two big black eyes. she is good at singing. she is a clear girl. she likes reading books. she like playing computer games and play chess. she is very funny and kind. she often help us. our classmates like her very much.