小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

i have a good friend. he is a handsome boy. he has short black hair, two small black eyes and a red mouth. his mind is better, he is good at zen. he is clever boy, he likes reading books, take photography and film. he is also nice. he often helps us. our classmates like him very much.