从句使用很不错,再接再厉;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误。
Psychology professor researched students of China about sharing feeling's opinions last weekend.More than 30 percent of students would not like to share with other people no matter delight or depression and through our educations children still don't understand the significant of sharing.Nevertheless, some specialists proposed to learn how to share self emotions, feeling and anything are important for person who lives in this era.It is benefit for growth of future to learn how to share feeling with surrounding environment.Thus, we need to learn how to share our feeling and emotions.