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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33580
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇基本功很好,但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

As my opinion about this matter, I totally agree with their words, we can't judge and consider this discussion either smart or not? It just depends on different situations For me, when I am a single girl, I will never aware of money should be save, because i am young , i want to do everything what I want with money, such as eat big meal, dress beautiful, make-up... go shopping... all of these activitest are necessary and spend a lot of money, I also very enjoy this process. But now, to be a mother and wife, I have my own familiy, there are many places have to spend money, however, my husband and I have a litmited resource to earn, that why I decide to change my cost value in nature from that moment. Finally, after through these years, it doesn't seems i am unhappy even less spend on outdoor activities and food enjoy. Since I have a nice family, cute baby, good husband, and kind parents to instead, they treat me very nice. I love them although we have differenences and contradictions, I will to do acceptance this current change, even I spend less compared with before. I think save is also a virtue

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