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As my opinion about this matter, I totally agree with their words, we can't judge and consider this discussion either smart or not? It just depends on different situations For me, when I am a single girl, I will never aware of money should be save, because i am young , i want to do everything what I want with money, such as eat a big meal, dress beautiful, make-up... go shopping... all of these activities are necessary and need to spend a lot of money, I also very enjoy this process. But now, to be a mother and wife, I have my own familiy, there are many places have to spend money, however, my husband and I have a limited resource to earn, that why I decide to change my cost value in nature from that moment. Finally, after through these years, it doesn't seem i am unhappy even less spend on outdoor activities and food enjoy. Since I have a nice family, cute baby, good husband, and kind parents to instead, they treat me very nice. I love them although we have differenences and contradictions, I will to do acceptance this current change, even I spend less compared with before. I assert that save is also a virtue