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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；缺少组织，上下文衔接欠流畅。
internet pays enormously impacts on the way people communicate. in my opinion, internet do heavily more benefits than deficient to our communication. at first, let us talk about the advantages of internet. internet can not only connect people from two remote places, but also let them see each other. in the past without , if we miss some people important to you who do not stay in the same city with you , we should take a transportation to another city for many hours or even several days. it is time consuming and tired. it is much convenient to a couple apart from each other, and children away from hometown for education and so on . internet communicating is also applied in business. generally , plenty of businesses have several locations distributed around the whole country. through internet , colleagues from different locations can hold conferences anytime . the invention of internet communication reduces the cost of the conferences. internet communication brings convenience to any of us . however , we can also see the negative side of the internet communication. we all enjoy the convenience of the internet communication, at the same time we decrease the times to visit others face to face. sometimes this alien people around us. communication face to face still varies from internet communication. communication face to face conveys emotions flat. therefore internet communication can not replace communication face to face. they both have features respectively
