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My town is not a famou splace,but all the peple love it whatever they are at the most time.because it have many kind of small eat.for exple,the fish noodles.all the peple in my town always like to eat fish noodles for breakfast.at the same time,they order a cup of green tea.they called this "eat morning tea".in this town,there is a park have a lot of water ,trees,birds,and flowers.in this park,there is a very intrsting perogrames.peple above 20 boating tegeathe once a year. in this day,the gavenment will inteview many actors and singers ,peple come here from other citrys and countrys.they came here visit and eat,or business.